
Sure, I was curious about what they were up to, but it felt like this book was two romances in one story. That brings me to my next point: There was WAY too much of Crowley and Rell in this story.

This story had the POV of both MCs (Tyler and David), but also of Crowley and Rell. I'm of the opinion that a romance should have either one or two POVs and NO MORE. For one, I absolutely hate more than two point of views in a story, especially a romance. I'll just jump right in and start talking about my issues. I mean, a pretentious hipster in denial about his bisexuality and a smitten jock? Sounded amazing! But while this story had some very good parts, it also frustrated me a great deal.

I was REALLY excited about the concept of the story. I've been looking forward to this book ever since Bowl Full of Cherries came out in 2014.
